Technological World

The prose goesvery well with the shot, the whole 'Though noo one questions why' seems to be emphasised as you, the person who is questioning it, looking on the world from a different perspective, so therefore the picture is slanted.
Still, my particularly favourite part of this picture is the spire that goes up into the sky, almost as if it dissapears, because we can't see any end to this evolution and increasing technological discovery.
It's just my critique, but I like that symbolism.
The sun really seems to bake down on the scene in a somewhat disturbing manner, so that I don't know whether you want me to think that nature is against this constant change we are making to this world or simply whether nature helps obscure the end we cannot see...
Nonetheless, that's the effect the desaturising gives it, and it's helpful.